Candy-Coated: the story of a badass with a lollipop for a head

Carlton Mellick III is one of bizarro fiction's most talented practitioners, a virtuoso of the surreal, science fictional tale. He was one of my students last year at the Clarion West workshop and was a real gem -- a great writer and insightful critiquer with exemplary work-habits (Carlton's the hardest-working man in bizarro, if you ask me). He's just placed a story, "Candy Coated," with Vice Magazine -- it concerns the romantic ambitions of a shallow muscle-bound womanizer whose head is a giant lollipop, whose fate unravels when he has the bad judgement to attend a fancy cheese-tasting. Vice has also recorded an audio version of the story, read by "the girl who tells you which register to use at Whole Foods over the PA."

Knob Tyler thinks he’s the strongest, toughest, most badass motherfucker on Mill Avenue. Unfortunately, Knob has a lollipop for a head. This makes him not quite as badass as he thinks he is.
While he’s strutting down the street with his white muscle shirt tossed over his sweat-drenched shoulder, Knob likes to flex his pectorals at the ladies. Whenever he says ladies, he pronounces it laydaaays. But for some reason the laydaaays are never impressed by the size of his pecs. They are too creeped out by his weird lollipop head to notice anything special about his muscles.
Knob’s lollipop head is the size of a bowling ball and light orange in color. The flavor of the lollipop is Tropical Sensation, which is a mixture of pineapple, mango, and star fruit. His tiny candy eyes, nose, and mouth are clustered together in the center of his large round face. His eyebrows are always curled downward to show how fucking serious he is about shit.

CANDY-COATED By Carlton Mellick III, Candy-Coated, read by the girl who tells you which register to use at Whole Foods over the PA (Thanks, Carlton!)

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#1 posted by Phil Hilliker , December 17, 2008 12:21 AM

That was fantastic. I've never heard of him but now I'm really curious about his other writings.

#2 posted by DevNall , December 17, 2008 2:39 AM

I enjoyed the hell out of Mellick's book "Satan Burger". Seriously weird shit but extremely entertaining.

#3 posted by Procrastes , December 17, 2008 2:31 PM

As usual, Cory is following me around in his balloon ready to bungee down and give me deep background and information directly related to my most recent obsession. I've just been getting into Bizarro over the last month and just posted my review of The Bizarro Starter Kit (Orange) edited by Carlton Mellick III this morning. From what I've read so far of CMIII's work I've enjoyed Sausagey Santa most. It has firefights, a domme xmas fetishist named Decapitron and of course, a Santa made of sausage. You'll snort eggnog out your nose.

Here's my bizarro shelf:
http://www.goodreads.com/review/list/1772479?shelf=bizarro1

It's worth mentioning that I added Someone Comes to town, someone leaves town to the my bizarro shelf as well because it felt right there. I'm curious what Cory thinks about that classification. Do you think your book fits as a bizarro book?